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I didn't mean to give any heartaches
Did I really make everything go wrong
I'm willing to do whatever it takes
To make you stop crying all night long


Can't nothing make us be like before
I'm begging you, c'mon, listen please
When I call you, you either hang up or
Shout me how you're displeased


That's going to change
From today


The relationship we're having
You're the only one I need
The best thing that ever happened to me

My actions, those selfish and unloving
I'm done with jealousy and greed
From now on I'm gonna be


Tender and loving
I will be tender and loving


In life I have turned a new leaf
It's the end for the grief
A new way for us together
Oh yeah!


I promise to be tender and loving

I will be tender and loving
Tender and Loving (X Japan - Time Trip Loving)
My English version of the X Japan's song Time Trip Loving.

Like with Sadistic Desire, I kept the English lines and made up rest of the song. There weren't a translation in Youtube, so I don't know what the original song is about.

Rare song, since it has been only released on Orgasm single.


Critique appreciated.


Original song: Time Trip Loving

Performer: X Japan

Lyrics: Toshi

Music: Jun


X Japan - Time Trip Loving: www.youtube.com/watch?v=qCtM2n…

Orgasm single in Wikipedia: en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Orgasm_%…
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It's useless to pretend
What's with your attitude
I'm not trying to offend
Why are you being so rude


Why is it so hard to accept
I'm not being like this for disrespect
All those tears I have wept
I'm so sorry I can't be perfect


Is being different really that bad thing
Should everyone be out of the same mould
The amount of pain your comments do bring
You only hate us because we're so bold


Why is it so hard to accept...


I have to raise my voice
Because I am what I am
I didn't have a choice
Can't you even try to understand


Why is it so hard to accept...


If you can't love me the way I am
It's your loss then
I'm finding the ones who can
I don't want to be left outside ever again
I'm so sorry I can't be perfect
Many times it feels like you can't do anything without someone complaining about it.
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Passed out naked on a pool of vomit
Or snorting coke from groupie's boobs
All the weird things we commit
We don't wanna see that on evening news


It's our way to relax
After hard night of rock 'n' roll
Our way is party to the max
You only live once after all

What happens in backstage, stays in backstage
I don't wanna read it from some tabloid's page
What happens in backstage, stays in backstage
Ratting about it would only put us in disgrace


Getting a blowjob from a pornstar
Or writing an autograph in girl's butt
I don't care who you are
I just wan't you to keep your mouth shut


It's our way to relax...

What happens in backstage, stays in backstage...


Drinking so much you can't speak
Or having an OD in bathroom stall
The facts about that can't leak
So don't speak about that nothing at all


It's our way to relax...

What happens in backstage, stays in backstage...

What happens in backstage, stays in backstage...
What happens in backstage...
I wanted to write a Steel Panther type glam rock novelty song, so here's one about the stuff happening in backstage.


Steel Panther at Wikipedia: en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Steel_Pa…

Steel Panther Youtube channel: www.youtube.com/user/SteelPant…
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Eyes of glass with clear vision
Helps to make a wise decision
Eyes of glass with cracked surface
Important things are easy to miss


Heart of glass filled with love and tenderness
Will bring joy and acts of selflessness
Heart of glass filled with acid of hate
Will bring pain worth of all its weight


Soul of glass shining bright
Can bring so much delight
Soul of glass which is dark and hollow
Can only bring pain and sorrow


Body of glass, unique and useful
Mind of glass, unique and colorful
Life of glass, unique and beautiful
The turn this conversation just took
You're pressing on so damn hard
And if you're as stupid as you look
You're going to throw in the nazi card


Think with your brains, not with your heart
Involving too much emotions is not smart
Revealing all the aces right from the start
Is going to get you verbally torn apart


Learn to play your cards right
Or you're going to lose the fight
In seconds you have to decide
What card to use, which to put aside


The tactics you're going to choose
Will determine will you win or lose
Give your opinion without too much noice
Only idiots have to raise their voice


Opponents poker face might deceive
So leave few jokers in your sleeve
Make use of the enemy's weak spots
Then throw in your best shots


To win you have learn the game
From mistakes there's only you to blame
For everyone here the rules are same
Winner takes the glory, loser gets the shame


That's the way to win the debate
Stay calm, know the facts and be polite
Listen closely to your opponent and wait
Stun the opposition with your words might
It's sometimes hard to make up good ideas for new poems. If you have an idea for a poem, please write it here and I'll see what I can do with it.

Edit: The poems written by ideas of DA-members can be found in here: bemari.deviantart.com/gallery/…

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Thanks so much for the llama! Llama jump
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